Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Polar-Bear Poem







                                                           Polar bear Poem



                                                 If I were a polar bear
                                                 I would live in the freezing
                                                 arctic where my kind would roam.


                                                 If I were a polar bear
                                                 I would eat all kinds of fish
                                                 and all kinds of seals as well.


                                                 If I were a polar bear
                                                 I would be colored with
                                                 white warm fuzzy fur all
                                                 over my body.


                                               If I were a polar bear
                                               I would hide in the snow
                                               from my kind then I would pounce
                                               on them.



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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:29 PM

    I like the three interesting adjectives to describe the fur and i think you should work on P4 because it was it was not that clear.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 2:49 PM

    It's very interesting and I love the first paragraph great job.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 3:00 PM

    It' a really good poem but I think you should put some image in your POME.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 3:02 PM

    I like how you created a picture in my mind about being in the freezing cold arctic & catching different foods!!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2015 at 5:30 PM

    good job XD

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